Welcome to Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday. Snippets of ten sentences or less are yours for the reading!
Because of the prompt “shades,” we’re doing something a little different this week. I use the word in HERO’S END, due to be released on September 12. This snippet comes from a scene near the end of the book as Blade, coming back from getting takeout, doesn’t put out his cigarette before getting onto the lift.
Despite the Delian herbs of the cigarette dampening his senses, he felt apprehension and fear radiating off the other occupants of the lift capsule. His gaze flicked over the scrawny little humanoid male, whose throat spasmed convulsively as he swallowed. The plump Joy Babe at his side eyed him with a mixture of trepidation and contempt.
He’d been getting that reaction ever since he left the apartment.
Unshaven, tousled hair, dark sun shades and a well-worn hovercycle jacket, he looked like a street tough.
After having screaming strangers throwing themselves at him for the past few years, open fear and avoidance were a welcome change of pace.
“Y-you’re not supposed to smoke in the lift,” the Joy Babe stammered.
Gaining some sort of twisted amusement from the situation, Blade drew deeply on the cigarette and plucked it from his mouth. He slowly blew out the smoke, watching their reaction.
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8 thoughts on “Saturday Snippet: No Smoking In The Lift”
I love his analysis of the situation. It’s funny.
Yeah, the characterization here was a lot of fun. It wasn’t Blade at his most likable, but it was an interesting insight into his psyche.
Guess any change is refreshing, and worth investigating 😛 As an actor, I’m sure it gave him plenty of food for thought, lol!
I hate having my air polluted.
Gotta say, I’d be a bit pissed at Blade. But I’d keep my trap shut. 🙂 Love the photo.
Personally, I think he’s being a bit of an ass. The thing is, he thinks so, too!
Thanks about the pic. When it scrolled across my news feed, I thought of this scene.
You’re a bad boy, Blade. *chuckles*