Saturday Snippet: All Or Nothing

Welcome to Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday. Snippets of ten sentences or less are yours for the reading!

Today’s snippet comes from Book Two of The Black Wing Chronicles ~ HERO’S END.

The game between Bo and “Rex” is heating up.

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His cracked and lipless mouth curved in a travesty of a smile. “Let’s dispense with the pretense that you’re here because of my winning personality.”

With a thump, Bo let her chair fall forward back onto all four legs. “Fine. Let’s.”

“One last wager — all or nothing on this hand,” he practically purred.

It was no secret that Rex cheated. Bo knew that he had a perfect Five-Point in his hand. It was the only thing that would beat her. She leaned forward bracing her elbows on her knees.

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Saturday Snippet: Nightmare On Wheels

Welcome to Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday. Snippets of ten sentences or less are yours for the reading!

Today’s snippet comes from Book Two of The Black Wing Chronicles ~ HERO’S END.

Last week, Bo met “Rex,” a third generation clone and black market collector rumored to have her father’s stasis pod. Whether or not her father is still in it remains to be seen. She’s playing him in a friendly game of Five-Point that is about to get…decidedly unfriendly.

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Word was he had her father. If Barron biomatter feeding that nightmare on wheels, there would be no fourth-generation Rex clone. Bo wouldn’t leave enough genetic material unscorched for any more clones.

“Let’s make this game interesting.” The tinny tenor of his voice cut through the heavy silence with the precision of a medical laser.

Bo kept her expression carefully bland. “What did you have in mind?”

“I know why you sought me out, Barron,” he said. “You want your father’s stasis pod.”

“Do I?”

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Saturday Snippet: Playing Rex

Welcome to Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday. Snippets of ten sentences or less are yours for the reading!

Today’s snippet comes from Book Two of The Black Wing Chronicles ~ HERO’S END.

While Blade has been swaggering around buckling swashes and the like, Bo hasn’t been sitting around painting her nails. Independent lady that she is, she’s managed to track down a lead on her father’s whereabouts. According to her Sub-socia sources, a black market collector named “Rex” has come into possession of her father’s stasis pod. Whether or not her father is still in it remains to be seen.

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Bo’s amber eyes narrowed as she pulled her gamecard from the randomizing field on the table.

“I call,” she said, tossing a stack of local currency into the pot.  “And I’ll raise you fifty.”

Bracing her booted foot against the edge of the table, she leaned her chair back onto two legs, balancing easily while she tucked the gamecard into her hand; a near-perfect Five-Point.

Her gaze settled on Rex, the only other player. She tried to ignore the feeding tubes that looped over his neckline like some hi-tech collar. The fluids that extended his life expectancy well-beyond nature’s intentions surged through in a gruesome show of wealth and excess. His pallid, corpselike flesh reflected far too much of the dim light that shone down on the Five Point table. If the rumors were true, this Rex was a third-generation clone of the original. He was the stuff of legend, and not the good kind.

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Next Big Thing Blog Tour

I was tagged in the Next Big Thing Blog Tour by TK Toppin last week and back in November, I was also tagged by Chantal Halpin, but I forgot to post. So here I am, making up for it.

 

BWC HERO'S END option A (1)What is the working title of your book?
This is the second book in THE BLACK WING CHRONICLES series. The title is HERO’S END.

Where did the idea for your book come from?
I was working on the last book in this series as a stand-alone. There was so much work still to be done, so I sketched out some important back-story narrative for my own reference. A submission call from an editor gave me the idea to toss together a novella from some of my notes. That evolved into the first book in the series, SOVRAN’S PAWN. I realized I had a story arc that needed to be bridged, so I tried to piece together how my characters (Bo Barron and Blade Devon) got from the end of SOVRAN’S PAWN to the beginning of the last book. I had tossed together a few scenes about Blade’s life as a high-profile holofeature actor, including taking Bo as his date/bodyguard to a red-carpet premiere, but the first scene that really jelled for me was Blade’s hovercycle accident. I knew from those two scenes that someone had to actively be trying to kill Blade in this book. With that knowledge, I deconstructed the situation, taking into consideration the vast scope of everything that needed to happen in this book to satisfy the story arc, then I sat down and cried.

What genre does your book fall under?
This book is a space opera for certain. We’re dealing with vast stretches of space, plots to overthrow governments, impossible pseudo-science, primitive mysticism, alien religions, and a love story.

errol-flynn-7Which actors would you chose to play in your movie rendition?
That’s a tough question. Blade has developed a bit of a fan following. Everyone has their own image of him in their minds, according to their own tastes. I love that. I would really hate to spoil that for people by naming someone to play Blade and having half of his fans say “ewwww.” So when I’m asked this question, I usually say that as a holofeature actor, Blade could, of course, play himself.

He’s a compilation of many of my favorite swashbuckling heroes of TV and film. He was inspired originally by Errol Flynn, whose off-screen acts of derring-do were well-known in his day, and whose biography suggested he may have been a WWII spy.

Bo is also a compilation of characters. You can find bits of Angelina Jolie, Gabrielle Anwar, Anne Hathaway, Michelle Yeoh, and a few select high-profile fashion models.

As for the supporting cast, I don’t mind saying that I cast this book with bits and pieces of Nathan Fillion, Hugh Jackman, Russell Crowe, Sean Bean, Bruce Campbell, David Duchovny, Sean Connery, Eva Gabor, Ava Gardner to name a few.


What is the one-sentence synopsis of your book?

I need to come up with one…seriously. I’m not to the point I can narrow it down to one sentence yet. That’s the last thing I do before I publish. A brief synopsis might read something like this –

An attempt on the life of holofeature hero Blade Devon sets into motion a series of events that take him and his lover, convicted traitor Bo Barron, on a quest to find her missing father, and to uncover secrets of Blade’s past that he isn’t willing to let come to light, despite murder and betrayal.

Will your book be self-published or represented by an agency?
I’m too much of a control freak. I’ve been very pleased with the sales and results from my self-publishing, and I like having creative control over the cover art and the series development, so I’m sticking with it for now.

How long did it take to write the first draft of your manuscript?
From the initial inception to the completion of the first draft was several years in the making. The scenes that provided the foundation for HERO’S END I first scratched down back in 2009 and shelved. Once I sat down to work on it in earnest, it only took four months for the first draft. Of course, I consider the first draft to be the first telling of the main story from beginning to end. What I had at that point was horribly incomplete. Subsequent drafts require more attention to detail and plot threads, so they’ve taken an eternity. HERO’S END is also much darker than SOVRAN’S PAWN, which has made it more time-consuming for me to write.

What other books would you compare this story to?
I don’t really have an answer for that. The scope of this book reminds me a lot of Dune, (only less ponderous,) or one of the Game of Thrones books in that there is political intrigue, murder, war, betrayal, a bit of mystical coming-of-age.

What or who inspired you to write the book?
The readers who clamored for more after SOVRAN’S PAWN, hands-down. There has been such an overwhelmingly positive response from my readers that I really do feel I owe them the next part of Bo and Blade’s story.

What else about the book might pique the readers’ interest?
In this book, I introduce the characters who will populate a spinoff series set between HERO’S END and BARRON’S LAST STAND, which is the last book in THE BLACK WING CHRONICLES series. The spinoff series will be called THE MERCENARY ADVENTURES OF BLADE DEVON.

That’s it! That’s my Next Big Thing. Thanks for stopping by. Don’t forget to stop by Theresa Munroe’s blog next Wednesday!

Saturday Snippet: Hardened Killers and Holofeature Heroes

Welcome to Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday. Snippets of ten sentences or less are yours for the reading!

Today’s snippet comes from Book Two of The Black Wing Chronicles ~ HERO’S END.

By this point, in the book, Blade’s back is against the wall. There have been several attempts on his life, one nearly successful, and he’s been ordered to give up his holofeature career and the woman he loves to take a safe desk job, complete with high security and body guards to protect him ~ a situation akin to life in prison with no chance of parole. He’s only just barely shaken the men assigned to protect him. His window for disappearing is rapidly dwindling. This scene is one last big gamble where he’s throwing all his chips into the pot and hoping he can pull out a winning hand.

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Blade slipped away. If he was any judge of character, Kayne would do as Blade told him. He didn’t seem like a hardened killer. As he made his way across the theater, he studied the eight gunmen. Now, they looked like hardened killers.

He didn’t like having armed civilian variables in the mix. Too unpredictable. That’s why he’d played it so blasé with Kayne. He needed the kid to back him up but he wanted to make sure he didn’t get shot either. He also needed Kayne’s blind trust and he wasn’t above playing on his holofeature hero persona to get it.

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Saturday Snippet: Saving Civilians

Welcome back to Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday. Congratulations on surviving the great Zombie Apocalypse of 2012 and Happy New Year.

Today’s snippet comes from Book Two of The Black Wing Chronicles ~ HERO’S END.

By this point, in the book, Blade’s back is against the wall. There have been several attempts on his life, one nearly successful, and he’s been ordered to give up his holofeature career and the woman he loves to take a safe desk job, complete with high security and body guards to protect him ~ a situation akin to life in prison with no chance of parole. He’s only just barely shaken the men assigned to protect him. His window for disappearing is rapidly dwindling. This scene is one last big gamble where he’s throwing all his chips into the pot and hoping he can pull out a winning hand.

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Blade nodded towards the civilians huddled under the seats. “And you’ve got innocent bystanders there who’ll be used as hostages before long. What you need to do is draw their fire while I get those people out of there. You help me get them out, then, I’ll even the odds a bit for you. Do we have a deal?”

“Are you for real?”

“Oh, I never joke about heroics.” Blade smiled. “That’s what pays my bills. Let me get into position and when I give you the signal, I want you to draw their fire.”

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Saturday Snippet: Flank That

Welcome to Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday. Snippets of ten sentences or less are yours for the reading!

Today’s snippet comes from Book Two of The Black Wing Chronicles ~ HERO’S END.

By this point, in the book, Blade’s back is against the wall. There have been several attempts on his life, one nearly successful, and he’s been ordered to give up his holofeature career and the woman he loves to take a safe desk job, complete with high security and body guards to protect him ~ a situation akin to life in prison with no chance of parole. He’s only just barely shaken the men assigned to protect him. His window for disappearing is rapidly dwindling. This scene is one last big gamble where he’s throwing all his chips into the pot and hoping he can pull out a winning hand.

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You know, you’re in way over your head, don’t you?” Blade countered matter-of-factly. “I’m sorry… What did you say your name was?”

“Kayne,” he replied, “and yeah. It’s occurred to me.”

Blade shook his head. “It’s only a matter of time before you’re flanked and overrun,” he said. “They’ve started going for position. If they get the upper hand, it’s going to be a bloodbath.”

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Saturday Snippet: Not A Holofeature

Welcome to Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday. Snippets of ten sentences or less are yours for the reading!

Today’s snippet comes from Book Two of The Black Wing Chronicles ~ HERO’S END.

By this point, in the book, Blade’s back is against the wall. There have been several attempts on his life, one nearly successful, and he’s been ordered to give up his holofeature career and the woman he loves to take a safe desk job, complete with high security and body guards to protect him ~ a situation akin to life in prison with no chance of parole. He’s only just barely shaken the men assigned to protect him. His window for disappearing is rapidly dwindling. This scene is one last big gamble where he’s throwing all his chips into the pot and hoping he can pull out a winning hand.

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The two young men looked more like bored, spoiled sons of well-to-do families than mercenaries or private investigators. Between their trendy clothes and their up-to-the-millisecond haircuts, they looked more like they belonged in a teen fan periodical.

A shot whizzed past the young man’s head and he ducked lower behind his cover. Though he was about Blade’s height, he managed to hunker tightly down, getting very small. Another blast struck sending sparks showering over them. He covered his head with his hands.

“You might want to try shooting back at them,” Blade said, folding his arms across his chest.

The young man stared at him; his brown eyes wide with disbelief and fear. “You do know this isn’t a holofeature, don’t you?”

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I Didn’t See That Coming – Foreshadowing

I was very excited to find a blog post on foreshadowing this morning. Unfortunately, it didn’t really tell me anything about foreshadowing. It told me more about the author’s latest book. That’s all well and good, but I was put off. It felt like someone was pulling the old bait and switch on me. That makes me cranky. When I get cranky, I do something about it. So this morning, I wrote my own damn post on foreshadowing. So there.

On About.com Richard Nordquist defines foreshadowing thusly: The presentation of details, characters, or incidents in a narrative in such a way that later events are prepared for (or “shadowed forth”).

In short, it’s setting the stage for future events. Foreshadowing creates a mood. It sets up the audience for the main conflict and the climax, or the catalysts that bring about the climax. It’s a device mystery writers use to plant red herrings and lead the reader to the clues that solve the case. In horror, it’s used to create mood and warn audiences not to get too attached to that character because he or she will be the next victim. In romance, it provides the niggling little doubts as to whether or not the hero and heroine will end up together.

Most readers never consciously notice it. Executed properly, it is very subtle and paves the way for the emotional impact the writer seeks to evoke. Writing fiction is all about evoking emotion. I’ll go back and say it again. The first and greatest lesson I learned was that as a writer, if you’re not evoking emotion in your reader, you may as well be writing a cookbook. But then, even the best cookbooks evoke some kind of emotion these days.

I mention foreshadowing because I’m consciously using it in HERO’S END. 29543_322708094509389_1163963974_nThere’s a bit of a mystery going on and foreshadowing is a natural tool in mysteries. Foreshadowing isn’t all dark portents either. As a writer, if I’m going to use an object to save the day, or to slay the bad guy on page 180, I need to introduce the object around page 20 or so. If a fact is going to be the catalyst for an emotional scene, I need to allude to the fact early and repeat it a few times before it actually causes the issue. If the reader hasn’t built up the same emotional response as the character, when the character explodes in a ball of angst, it seems to have come out of left field. Or if one of your characters must die in keeping with the story line, you need to prepare the reader for it. Think red shirts.

Some writers call it back-writing. Once you’ve written the main story, you go back through and sprinkle the images, references, clues and allusions throughout the story, building up to the climax or event.

In SOVRAN’S PAWN, I used Blade’s sunshades, which interfaced with his IC data reader for a head’s up display. I introduced the shades with Blade when he met Bo. I introduced the interface in the following chapter. At the climax, the shades and their interface were vital for getting him where he needed to be. Without the mention of them earlier, it would have seemed like a Deus Ex Machina intervention and a cheap device.

I read a debut novel by an author of my acquaintance in which her main character does a complete about-face of personality at the climax. Unfortunately, there was no foreshadowing of this possibility, so when it happened, her readers rebelled. Because her book was published by an imprint of a large publishing house, there’s really no excuse. This is the kind of thing good editors and beta readers normally catch.

Never underestimate the value of foreshadowing or the subtlety of a skilled hand on the pen.

Saturday Snippet: Who Brings A Client To A Firefight?

Welcome to Science Fiction Fantasy Saturday. Snippets of ten sentences or less are yours for the reading!

Today’s snippet comes from Book Two of The Black Wing Chronicles ~ HERO’S END.

By this point, in the book, Blade’s back is against the wall. There have been several attempts on his life, one nearly successful, and he’s been ordered to give up his holofeature career and the woman he loves to take a safe desk job, complete with high security and body guards to protect him ~ a situation akin to life in prison with no chance of parole. He’s only just barely shaken the men assigned to protect him. His window for disappearing is rapidly dwindling. This scene is one last big gamble where he’s throwing all his chips into the pot and hoping he can pull out a winning hand.

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He shook his head in disbelief. A shot hit the partition sending him ducking behind it. “Umm… they’re the bad guys.”

“What did they do?” Blade asked.

“They took a diary that belonged to a lady,” he said. He flinched as a volley of shots struck the other side of the wall. “We were hired to recover it. We did and they want it back. Adin’s up there in the balcony with our client trying to keep her from getting shot.”

Blade peered up into the balcony. “What the hell is your client doing in the middle of a firefight?”

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That’s the snippet for the week. Thank you for stopping by. Please take the time to visit the other wonderful authors taking part in Science Fiction/Fantasy Saturday!